The Source of All Calamity

[InZanety]

Your Name: Zane
Your Age: 18
Canon or Custom Character: Custom
RP Experience: Average
Rules Password: killerbeesandbumbletrees
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NPC or PC: NPC

Ymaggion Character Name: AVD: Schatten

Alias: The Source, Schatten, The Virus

Age: ??

Gender: None

Nationality: None

Rank: Delta (Disquised)

Strengths/Weaknesses:

His Rank is disquised as Delta to fool other players. His true rank is currently unkown until the staff of Ymaggion track his whereabouts.

Proeliator Form: Everything is average. No strengths, no weaknesses.

Glitched Form: Very high speed and high attack power. Low defence and the enemy will feel little or no pain. (Attacks still deal massive amounts of damage.)

Data Disruption Form: He is his own weakness. Reflect his attacks at his sheilded weakpoints, then use your own on the same spots.

Clothing/Armor:
Proeliator Form:


Glitched Form: He has a white facemask with no eyeholes or features. He also has black wings on either side. He has his left arm made completely out of multicolored lightning. His chestplate and armor bears no details other than white with black trim. He is also somewhat pixelated. When he moves he moves fast enough to see faded images of him behind him.

Data Disruption Form: He is all around you. It appears you have entered a world based entirely on glitches. You also appear in a transparent sphere the size of a skyscraper all around. It has several chambers based on the number of people trapped inside. There will also be a multi-beam cannon in the very center. The multi beam cannon will shoot different colored beams at the victims. On the outside of the sphere, there are orbs of different colors. These are his weakpoints. Reflect the beams of the cannon to hit the sheilds on his weakpoints to destroy them. Be careful, the color of the beam has to match the color of the weakpoint...

Physical Appearance: Whatever he looks like on the outside is what he looks like on the inside. (He is a part of his armor.)

Personality: He will not talk or sometimes even respond. He does, however, think logically. He's a wiz at solving codes and problems (Well he's a virus! Duh.) He has somewhat of a personality; he is very quick to anger and loathes the idea of something being impossible. If someone mentions something of the like, he will try to prove them wrong. He also can act like an animal with the animal instincts. In fact, he may even growl or hiss! Overall, he just doesn't like to speak.

Equipment: Proeliator Form: His right arm can change into several different weapons at will.

Miscellaneous Items: None

Elemental Affinity: None

Special Abilities:

Proeliator Form: None

Glitch Form: His Glitched Arm has the ability to change into several different weapons at will.

Transformations:

Proeliator Form (Pro-Schatten)

Glitch Form (Glitch-Schatten)

Data Disruption Form (Disrupt-Schatten)

Techniques:

Super Techniques:

Battle Style: His battle style has no specific form. He adapts according to his opponents' battle style. For example, if his opponent was slow (but powerful) he would counter it with using speed and agility, basically making him impossible to hit.

Companions:

Jihad: Jihad was revived by Schatten who found the data from the Beta Test files to do so. Schatten made a deal with Jihad: Jihad may continue to send souls to the Nightmare Realm only if Schatten at least gets a copy of their data. In return, Schatten infected Akumu's Mirror-Me, Xoqel, to set off at random times to send more players to the Nightmare Realm.

History:

This is the source of some of the glitches in the Ymaggion RPG. He was created a long time ago by a famous hacker known as Drei Osomia. Drei died along time ago in a car accident, yet his virus lived on and acted on its own. This virus was called AVD Schatten. The AVD stands for "Adaptive Viral Data". Schatten recently infected all of the defence systems in America to turn on itself. Luckily for America, a certain 'hero' saved the day. Schatten was still not deleted...

When the officials knew that Drei Osomia was behind the attack, they tracked him down and arrested him. Apparently, someone else didn't want him giving away any more information, so that someone else crashed a tow truck into the police cruiser, killing Drei. Police at HQ found he was also an illegal immigrant and could find no files for family, insurance, ect., leaving Xing to fend for himself.

Schatten, having a mind of his own and always hungry for data and knowledge, released himself from Osomia's computer and into the net. He tracked down the most proficient and quantitive data which led him to the world of Ymaggion. Here, he actually took on a form other than just computer information. He found he could 'steal' and copy weapon data from this world from other players.

Schatten believes he is acting on his own plans, but there is someone else out there who led him into Ymaggion, and is attempting to build a machine to actually bring this Virus into the real world.

RP Example: Pro-Schatten walked through the Angel's Core, looking for the engine of Ymaggion's existence. Then he found it, the building that was centered amongst the others. He could feel the mass amounts of data streaming from its computer terminals. He walked forward, only to find Angel Gaurds at the door.

"You are no administrator, nor do you have permission from one to enter." One of the Angel Gaurds said with a commanding voice. "Turn around and--."

Pro-Schatten's right arm shifted into a Raijin Gun and zapped the Angel Gaurd. The Angel fell unconcious and Schatten absorbed his data. Then Schatten swiftly turned his head to the other Angel as if to say,"Let me in, or your next."

The Angel, sweating profusely, nodded his head. When the Schatten Virus entered, the Angel contacted the other Guards and a few staff members saying, "We have a problem..."

Extra: Drei, is actually Xing's father. Xing is the one who plays Zane Truesdale in Ymaggion.

[Ribitta]

As I said in the techs, if he's disguised, shouldn't his currently shown abilities match with that? If it did, he'd have only one possible thing to change into.

As for the personality and battle-style, I keep getting the impression like you just took the easy way out <.< If you don't want to portray how speaks, fine. However everything has some sort of thought process or reasoning process. You'd put something like that in their. Battle style, adaptive, sure, but go in deapth about how he matches it. Would he simply only use techniques if his opponent was? Or would he use techniques in the same type of way, same motions, etc. If he can copy battle-styles, I believe that would fall under Special Abilities as well.

You can add a lot more to the History, I know you can. Do it! If he's been the system a while, what has he done, if not, what did he do on the internet? Four lines is a bit weak no matter which way you slice it.

Finally, who is Jihad? Give some description on him, or a link where we could find some.

[Rising Dragon]

Myself, I was under the impression that Meta killed Jihad shortly after Jihad killed Sin Incarnate. If he's to remain dead, I don't see the reasoning behind putting him as a companion.

[InZanety]

Edited.

[Morph]

This is the source of almost all glitches in the Ymaggion RPG.

>______________>


At least reduce this part to "some glitches".

Also, for as long as he is Epsilon rank, he will be unable to deal massive amounts of damage, it'd be moderate at best. He would also not be super-duper-quick or -strong.

Oh, and please put the abilities of the forms in the abilities section.

[InZanety]

Edited.

[Morph]

Shadow Mirror Form: Schatten takes on the abilities of his opponent along with attacks, stats, and possibly features.

I do not approve of this ability. Please do remove it.

As for Disrupt-Schatten, his ability is more like a technique. Remove it and register it as a Technique please.

Furthermore, he may not speak much, but he does have a personality. Please expand the second to become thrice as big or so.

Also, if you could, please remove the extra slashmarks.

[InZanety]

Err... How'd that happen? Anyways, fixed.

[Ribitta]

Most of the history is just Battle Network. Doesn't really seem right to me, but I'll leave that to higher forces to decide.

As for the other stuff, I just kind of disslike how you tend to use second person quite a bit... It's hard to read and understand to the fullest extent when all the pronouns are jumbled. If you could fix that, that'd be great... otherwise I think its pretty much fine... if you don't count the history. Like I said though, I could be missing somethign as some of it may have deeper meaning.

[InZanety]

Ok. I think you'll find it alright now.

[Ribitta]

Bah, we love to make you wait don't we?

Please remove all connections to Battle Network, as our little world here is in a different universe.

[InZanety]

There, I switched up his story a bit.

[Ribitta]

Now that the Delta rule is down, would you like to revamp this a little to up the rank? If not, I suppose this is acceptable.

[InZanety]

I would like this to remain delta until a certain point in his story has been reached. I would really like his character rank to be "Unknown" when the staff track him down... I doubt that'll be acceptable though.

[Morph]

Well, if he is to remain at Delta for the time being due to his "disguise" then all his powers, abilities and techniques will have to match that.