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Post by InZanety on Jan 4, 2008 11:18:55 GMT -5
Name of Technique: Stun Wave Creator of the Technique: AVD Schatten Type of Technique: Stun Character Rank: Delta Link to Character Profile: www.projectepsilon.proboards78.com/index.cgi?board=storychar&action=display&thread=1199412515Rank of Technique: Epsilon Element of Technique: None Effects of Technique: Schatten pounds the ground with his Glitched Arm and the multi-colored lightning particles travel through the ground and hits anyone on the ground within 2 yards. They will be rendered immobile for 3 seconds. How acquired: AVD Schatten found this ability while practicing with his glitch powers. RP Example: Glitch-Schatten jumped off the building of the Angel\'s Core City, and landed in the middle of a bunch of different players. At the same time, he pounded the ground with his Glitched Arm for his Stun Wave attack, rendering them immobile. Then he spun around with his Glitched Arm hitting all of them. The arm made out of the multi-colored lightning did enough damage to kill them. Schatten stood up, and absorbed the players\' data.
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Post by InZanety on Jan 4, 2008 12:02:38 GMT -5
Name of Technique: Glitch and Viral Energy Manipulation
Type of Technique: Energy
Character Rank: Delta
Rank of Technique: Epsilon - Delta
Element of Technique: None
Effects of Technique: AVD Schatten uses his Glitched Arm to control viral and glitched energy. The attacks can take many different forms: Sphere, Whip, Beam, Bomb, Wall, Chained, Pillar, and lastly, Discs. A few of these forms of this energy are higher ranks. The higher ranked ones will be useable after Schatten\'s disquised rank has dissapated.
Sphere(Epsilon): Schatten forms a sphere of this energy in his regular hand from his Glitched Arm and throws it, it homes in on its target.
Pillar(Epsilon): A pillar of this energy rises from the ground from under the target, doing damage.
Beam(Epsilon): His Glitched Arm turns into a Glitch Beam Cannon and fires a beam of this energy.
Bomb(Epsilon): Schatten forms a sphere of this energy in his regular hand from his Glitched Arm and throws it, it explodes when it comes into contact with anything.
Wall(Delta): A wall of this energy rises from the ground and spreads slowly outward for 12 yards, doing damage to anything that it comes in contact with.
Whip(Delta): Schatten\'s Glitched Arm holds a whip made out of this energy and lashes it at his opponents.
Chained(Delta): Schatten throws a ball of this energy that homes in on his opponent and jumps to other enemies and/or back on the target. It jumps 4-6 times.
Discs(Delta): The Glitched Arm fires up to 7-12 discs of this energy that home in on the enemy. It passes through the enemy up to 2-3 times doing damage.
All of these attacks do damage but the enemy doesn\'t realize the pain.
How acquired: Schatten has always had Glitch and Viral Energy Manipulation.
RP Example: Schatten, repeatedly kept on firing the discs of his viral energy at his opponent until it reached up to at least 49 discs. They kept swirling around the player and passing through him. It seemed as though it was doing nothing to the enemy, but when the discs were finished, the player flopped over onto the ground... He was dead.
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Post by InZanety on Jan 4, 2008 12:29:28 GMT -5
Name of Technique: Tele-Dash
Type of Technique: Dash, Speed
Rank of Technique: Delta
Element of Technique: None
Effects of Technique: Schatten takes about 2 seconds to start his attack then he dashes into an enemy and past it with speed right below a teleport. The enemy is then stunned for 2 seconds. When Schatten\'s disquised rank is revealed this technique will change to Gamma rank. When this happens, Schatten will only hesitate for 1 second, the enemy will be knocked back, and will also be stunned for 3 seconds.
How acquired: Schatten has had this ever since he entered the Ymaggion World.
RP Example: Schatten hesitated, then dashed forward at the player and disappeared from view. As this happened, the player was knocked backward and was stunned. Schatten was already behind the player, and caught him. Then Schatten used his Glitched Arm and turned it into a whip and strangled the player to death. After the player died, Schatten absorbed his data.
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Post by Ribitta on Jan 4, 2008 20:00:29 GMT -5
If he's Epsilon, then he wouldn't be able to use Gamma techniques, right? Also, as of new rules, only one super tech per character apparently.
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Post by InZanety on Jan 4, 2008 20:27:43 GMT -5
Read "The Source of All Calamity" for Schatten's profile and you'll see why the ranks for the techniques are so high. It explains why under "Rank".
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Post by Ribitta on Jan 4, 2008 21:35:51 GMT -5
I'm aware of that, but if you're appearing as an Epsilon, wouldn't you want to have his techniques be of that level and introduce the new ones as his true identity was revealed?
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Post by InZanety on Jan 5, 2008 20:55:02 GMT -5
Good point. I'll fix it.
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Post by InZanety on Jan 5, 2008 21:10:47 GMT -5
All three have been fixed. Stun wave has been 'weakened' persay to fit the rank of epsilon.
The energy manipulation has a few different ways to use it, so I made it so he can only use a few of them until his rank is revealed.
The same idea goes for the teledash. The teledash has been delayed and the stun time has been shortened. When his rank is revealed, the delay will be shorter, the effects will last longer, and it will also have the knockback ability.
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Post by Ribitta on Jan 6, 2008 2:31:30 GMT -5
I approve.
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Post by Rising Dragon on Jan 6, 2008 2:50:45 GMT -5
Fix all instances of viral and disguised--you misspelled both. Also, in the Glitch and Viral Energy Manipulation, your character is using a lot more viral disks than his tech description allows. I suggest fixing it.
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Post by Morph on Jan 6, 2008 4:18:28 GMT -5
Give all the techniques just one rank, if you please. Especially with the Energy Manipulation. Delta/Epsilon is okay, but not Gamma. That would turn it into a not-quite-but-still-quite-kind-of-Super-Technique. So do take that off, please.
I approve of the Stun Wave.
If the Glitched and Viral Energy Manipulation is Epsilon-ranked it'd deal damage, but not a lot. Of course, with only a little damage it would perhaps be more logical that the victim would not realise the pain then with massive damage.
Also, are the forms of attacks listed in the Energy Manipulation the only ones?
I'd find the Tele-Dash if you'd put it as Delta-rank.
Also, you could make the character Delta-rank and after a while request for him to be upgraded to Gamma rank.
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Post by InZanety on Jan 7, 2008 11:10:37 GMT -5
Edited
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